There is no originality in the idea, the technique and the form of this poem, still the poem itself is original.
start doing
it the
and then
learn and
don't you
work then
it learn
you work
the start
doing you
Now, here's the thing: Can you guess the two sentences that form the words of this poem? The first and second lines have ten words each. I'll post the two sentences, but only on getting a minimum of five responses, so come on guys!
The banana is a red variety from Kerala. A friend had got the root home and we had planted it, but it dried up completely. We continued watering it as a ritual. Then we went to Bombay for three days and when we came back, it was such a pretty sight! Can any Shiva linga be as beautiful as this, I ask.
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Talking of Star Power, here's a bit of perspective. I love this image, and you'll be able to see it best if you clicked on it.
The heavens tell us something!
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Talking of heaven, this time in Bombay I felt very alien. Alien to the spaces, the running time, in a city where time is money, alien to the shops, the hoardings, the sense of life that is so different to the sense of life in forests. I came back home and gave a big smile at the welcoming carpet laid out for us by the sea almond trees. Aaahhhh...
Many congratulations Salil ! You are such an inspiration to the rest of us!
ReplyDeleteI am sure you must have enjoyed the carpet laid out by the Almond trees more than any red carpet in Mumbai :)
Dear Salil, It was very pleasing to watch you recieving an award from Salman yesterday. I showed you when you appeared on television to my wife and kids and then spent then next half an hour or so narrating your story and how we together spent our growing days in Bamrauli. Keep on and be an inspiration to one and all. You symbolize how one can rebuild one's life if he has the will and grit when most what we hope for had been lost.
ReplyDeleteRahul Pathak, Patna
I've been hoping for those five comments, so you'd reveal the sentence. I've been racking my brain in L-mode and R-mode and I can only come up with a seven word sentence. Oh well. No deadline, right?
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the award :)
congrats.... bro !
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